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THE "ATROCITY
EXHIBITION" DISCUSSIONS
8: THE SUMMER
CANNIBALS
[RMcG: 10 February 2007]
The Summer Cannibals is an
oddly-stripped down little story, a kind of parable about sexual desire that
takes place in some offseason resort, away from the people and obsessions of the
mental institute.
our story opens with tman and his wife -- he's off wandering the heat-stricken
shore and finally returns to the car where she's been reading a novel...
then he's in their resort room, lying in bed, watching the drained river, a
white power cable, and his wife, fresh and wet from a shower, lies down wet and
starts smoking on the bed
he's next outside, watching a woman with "unintelligent eyes" flipping
thru magazines... he follows her to an outdoor cinema, becomes bored with her,
and sits watching the curved screen... she watches him
he's back in the resort room, lying in bed with his sleeping wife... deformed by
a sleep pose, her boobs squish against his shoulder... he fantasizes on
restructuring her body into a more obscene geometry, and moves without
disturbing her... outside bits of bridget bardot's body are visible on the
cinema screen
he's now with the young woman at the drained river... the mud basins remind him
of labyrinths, then of aspects of bardot's body... somehow, he already knows
intimately the repertoire of her body... the inclined floors of the car park
somehow contain an operating formula for their passage thru consciousness
(conceptual perversity?)
he's in the kiosk with the woman... discovers a mole on her shoulder... kisses
it... she watches with a tired smile, the same one she used when they screwed
that afternoon...
back to his wife... she's drying her novel and painting her nails... the gap
between them has widened... "what act between them would provide a point of
junction?"
he remembers stuff that used to provide such a junction: a combination of her
activities in what appears to be taking a trip from the room to the resort's
pool, with the car park and elevator panel tossed in... obsessive attention to
detail
back at the cafe with the girl, he plays with stuff on the table while she reads
a magazine... his trouser's crotch is wet... turns out she has been putting him
off with "chronic cystitis" and "sore urethra", so he got
dressed, took her to the restaurant, and has been feeling her up for four hours,
"hunting for some concealed key to their sexuality"... why is his
crotch wet?
Tman then indulges in some philosophic wondering about sex... interestingly, he
asks the "what" question... "in what way is intercourse per
vagina more stimulating than with this ashtray, or with the angle between two
walls?"... and then JG makes his point: "sex is now a conceptual
act... sexual perversions are morally neutral, cut off from any suggestion of
psychopathology.... we need to invent a series of imaginary sexual perversions
just to keep our feelings alive"... while tman's explaining this, a young
man appears and listens... later the girl is seen with him by the cinema
tman is next back with his wife, driving among the dusty, ashy dunes... the
novel is in the car... all day they've been driving around and walking beside
the drained river... overhead the motor bridge crossed... he tells her to drive
"elements of an orgasm", the next para, is a tour-de-force of
imagination and observation, as wife and car tend to blend into a duchamp-like
description of her changing seats with tman... a purely scientific description
of almost pornographic detail... later, in the dark room, he rebuffs her
invitation for a drink on the beach.. she's cleaning the shower stall, outside
he can see the cinema and car park
tman next follows the young girl and man from the cinema kiosk to car park...
they drive away a billboard appears, but a billboard of sex and accusation...
they drive to the bridge over the drained river ... tman is behind them, in his
car... when the girl gets out of her car tman drives into the oncoming
traffic...
an accident occurs and the young man is killed.. she's hurt and covered in
blood... she grabs her purse and runs towards the cinema screen in town... tman
follows her in his car as she runs in the lights... tman ends up turning off his
car lights and slowly following her, "steering from side to side as he
varied her position against the roadside hoardings" (billboards), the
cinema and the car park... what is he conceptualizing? is it sadistic?
at the end tman is back with his wife... she's in the oil-spattered car wiping
her wrists with a cologne pad while he's wandering the beach... "after his
little affairs he seemed to enter a strange zone"... while she waits, a
young man arrives and "deliberately" leans against her car, staring at
her, almost touching her elbow... after he's left, the sand slowly fills in his
footprint... she puts away the novel and takes a newspaper, studying the pix of
the car crash -- five minutes later, tman returns... thinking of he pix, she
puts her hand on his lap...
hmmmm... certainly a more "literary" story, as one might expect when
the two major symbols are a novel and a magazine... with the novel representing
physical sex, and the magazine conceptual sex... and also as interiors, with the
cold rectangles of the resort and its rooms set up against the curves of dune,
cinema, river and bridge...
in fact, perhaps it is the lack of enigma in identifying the symbols and plot
that makes "summer cannibals" a short, understandable little story
with a fairly simple message -- "invent a series of imaginary sexual
perversions" and your relationships will maintain that all-important
psychic zing... I'm sure this message had a lot more power in it during the late
1960s, when a lotta sex probably became boring sex (as an aside, I have to
wonder if JG was getting any sex at all during this time -- writing, raising
kids, out in the dumps of sheppville... it couldn't have been that erotic)
I have a little paperback book from 1975 called "Fanta-Sex", by rolf
milonas, and it describes 60 fantasy sex roles, and 40 erotic situations in
combination with 30 plays and 20 positions. Any number can play! Bend the rules
to player's needs! causing car crashes and attacking a novel unfortunately
aren't in my book, but hanging out in spain during the hot summer isn't
recommended, either..
This seems a strange story, and even JG's annotations seem to be trying to add
interest where there is little... admitting this is a "saner" version
of tman, "devoid of those larger concerns that pre-occupy him elsewhere in
the book"... part of that, one assumes, is the result of locale: for the
first time tman appears without his doctorate, the institute, nathan, karen, all
of the couriers -- there's not even a helicopter... basically, it's a story of
sexual deceit told with a lack of affect that gives it a scientific narrative
with some radical musings on sexual psychology. Tman is drawn to the young woman
because of her "public" beauty, but he does not try to confuse her
with bardot. He is drawn to the car park, but does not visit it. He initiates a
car crash, but does not participate in it. He feels nothing for the girl, but
merely uses her for "some perverse pleasure of his own", which appears
to be some kind of a psychic recharging for sex with his wife...
basically, the whole story seems to boil down to a little sex-game tman and his
wife play... she is the novel (old school missionary position = love with
history) and the young woman is the magazine/newspaper ("her face, with its
unintelligent eyes...was reflected in the stereotypes of a dozen magazine
covers"), with its attention firmly on the popularization of sex and
violence...
the image of he novel is interesting -- the first time for a
"literary" form of media to appear... it first appears as the wife
reads in the car while tman wanders the beach... next, the novel
"hurts" tman in the ribs at the moment he disassociates from the
wife... suddenly, she's not "obscene" enough... he tosses it in the
bidet (with her pubis), but she rescues and dries it out and next thing you
know, tman is cheating on her... it re-appears in the rear window ledge of
tman's xar when he and the wife go driving thru ash heaps (hardly symbolic,
no?)... the heat "flowers" the pages... finally, at the end, again in
the car, again at the beach, she abandons the novel for the newspaper, and tman
immediately returns, and the pix of the car accident has a positive effect on
her libido... nice little ironic statement on the novel --
on the flip side, tman finds the girl, seduces her, publicly mauls her, gives
her to another man, follows them, kills him by causing a traffic accident,
follows her in her bedraggled state, and conceptualizes her in terms of bridget
bardot and the car park, then zones out until his wife re-initiates sexual
activity...
the question JG asks in this story is "in what way is intercourse per
vagina more stimulating than with this ashtray, or with the angle between two
walls?"... and the answer must be in no way, as a transference to something
non-biological (sex aid), or to simply using your imagination (which is what I
think the angle between two walls is -- what lies between reality and
fiction)... really doesn't matter if your only goal is an orgasm.
but if sex is now (or will be) a conceptual act, it's basic concepts will now
come, according to Ballard, not from the atrophied novel form, but from the
sexual and violent sadism shown in mass media like popular magazines and
newspapers... and once again the road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom...
[MH: 12 February 2007]
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RMcG wrote:
The Summer Cannibals is an oddly-stripped down little story, a kind of
parable about sexual desire that takes place in some offseason resort,
away from the people and obsessions of the mental institute.
hmmmm... certainly a more "literary" story, |
Having finally caught up with Summer Cannibals, I think that Rick is just about
spot on with that description of this latest At. Ex. chapter. There are some
musings that mightn't be out of place in the other chapters, such as the
comparisons of the human body with the geometry of cars or buildings, and the
conceptualization of sex, but this story is more straightforwardly written. I
think that I'd take it as an attempt to investigate one of the key concerns in
At. Ex. - what to do in a meaningless world - but in a more mundane setting that
may better reflect our everyday lives.
So what here's a few thoughts to add to what Rick's already said.
There's much play, both in the story and in the later annotations, on the way in
which people's lives are enervated at this type of Mediterranean resort. For
example: "exhausted by the sun, the resort was deserted", "the
growing numbers of full-time residents seem almost decorticated",
"bodies ... as inert as the joints of meat on supermarket counters",
and so on. Time passes, but nothing much happens, rather as in Vermilion Sands.
This enervation is reflected in T-Man's relationship with his wife: "An
enormous neutral ground now divided them, across which their emotions signalled
like meaningless semaphores." And this neutral ground, which the sun opens
up by bleaching away meaning, feelings, etc, is something that T-Man can utilise
... it opens up new vistas for him to explore.
The drained river bed that he examines with the young woman is one such area. It
is largely devoid of movement and life, but can reveal all sorts of interesting
patterns and shapes on its floor, for example "beds of mud like nightmare
chessboards". He wanders around the river bed, trying to make sense of its
geometry. Another fruitful area is the young woman's body: "in many ways
her body retraced the contours they had explored together."
The neutral ground provided by the resort suggests a suitable form of sexuality,
and T-man muses that "Sex is now a conceptual act, it's probably only in
terms of the perversions that we can make contact with each other at all. Sexual perversions are morally neutral, cut off from any
suggestion of psychopathology ... We need to invent a series of imaginary sexual
perversions just to keep our feelings alive ..."
But isn't it a bit odd for JGB to say 'cut off from psychopathology', given all
he has said elsewhere about using the psychopathological? Well, I think what he
means is that these perversions are not driven by anything deep within us, but
are just there on the surface, driven by the strength of the imagination rather
than the strength of the emotions ... or to use one of the catchphrases of At.
Ex., they are more 'conceptual'. Which is exactly what you would expect in the
spiritually exhausted inhabitants of the resort.
As meaning drains out of the resort and the out of lives of the people within
it, the normal sense of time disappears; i.e. time as a past and a future that
link with the present. So the past, instead of being a history, becomes
something that exists in our imaginations, and T-man can play around with his
memories: "He remembered these pleasures: the conjunction of her exposed
pubis with the polished contours of the bidet; the white cube of the bathroom
quantifying her left breast as she bent over the handbasin; ... her right hand
touching the finger-smeared panel of the elevator control. Looking at her from
the bed, he re-created these situations, conceptualizations of exquisite
games."
And just as 'the past' disappears, so does 'the future' ... or at least that
idea of the future as something that helps tie together our activities and
lives. Instead, we have an open plain of endless possibilities ... more
exquisite games for T-man: "Was he playing an elaborate game with [the
young woman], using their acts of intercourse for some perverse pleasure of his
own?"
In a way, the absence of time passing, the lack of change, is reflected in the
first and last paragraphs, both of which feature T-Man's wife waiting for him in
the car as he wanders around on the beach. These two paragraphs, which bookend
the story, are very similar: but are they two alternative versions of the same
event? ... or two different moments between which nothing much has changed? ... or is
there in no real difference between these two alternatives?
And right at the end of the story, the disappearing footprints of the young man
are symbolic of everything that may have happened: "she looked down at the
imprints of his feet in the white pumice. The fine sand poured into the hollows,
... [she sits] watching the last of the footprints vanish in the sand."
They just disappear, as if they were never there, vanishing to leave no trace.
They have been erased just as surely as the events of the story.
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RMcG wrote:
the image of he novel is interesting -- the first time for a
"literary" form of media to appear... it first appears as the
wife reads in the car while tman wanders the beach... next, the novel
"hurts" tman in the ribs at the moment he disassociates from the
wife... suddenly, she's not "obscene" enough... he tosses it in
the bidet (with her pubis), but she rescues and dries it out and next
thing you know, tman is cheating on her... it re-appears in the rear
window ledge of tman's car when he and the wife go driving thru ash heaps
(hardly symbolic, no?)... the heat "flowers" the pages...
finally, at the end, again in the car, again at the beach, she abandons
the novel for the newspaper, and tman immediately returns, and the pix of
the car accident has a positive effect on her libido... nice little ironic
statement on the novel -- |
The references throughout the story to his wife's book and the young woman's
magazine are an interesting touch, although I think another interpretation of
them is possible. I'd see the novel as symbolizing a story with a narrative (a
thread of meaning throughout), whereas the magazine is something we consume a
bit here, another bit there, whenever we feel like it, without any overall
meaning to hold it together.
And it is his wife's novel that T-Man throws into the bidet. What he now wants
is precisely the meaninglessness of a relationship with the young woman (or,
more strictly, a non-relationship) ... the meaninglessness of an issue of
Paris-Match.
All the same, I think there's an ambivalence here (as usual with JGB). The title
is, after all, "The Summer Cannibals" ... and in the neutral zone that
opens up for the characters, some of them may get devoured by others.
[RMcG: 12 February 2007]
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MH wrote:
There are some musings that mightn't be out of place in the other
chapters, such as the comparisons of the human body with the geometry of
cars or buildings, and the conceptualization of sex, but this story is
more straightforwardly written. I think that I'd take it as an attempt to
investigate one of the key concerns in At. Ex. - what to do in a
meaningless world - but in a more mundane setting that may better reflect
our everyday lives. |
mike, perhaps it's a "world without affect" that we're reacting to...
I don't think JG has sucked the "meaning" out of the landscape... but
he sure has sucked the "emotion" out of it...
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MH wrote:
There's much play, both in the story and in the later annotations, on the
way in which people's lives are enervated at this type of Mediterranean
resort. For example: "exhausted by the sun, the resort was
deserted", "the growing numbers of full-time residents seem
almost decorticated", "bodies ... as inert as the joints of meat
on supermarket counters", and so on. Time passes, but nothing much
happens, rather as in Vermilion Sands. |
well, nothing much happens because there's nobody around to do anything...
another of JG's little inversions, no? place a story at a resort, but do it when
it's so hot nobody else is around... except mad dogs and englishmen
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MH wrote:
This enervation is reflected in T-Man's relationship with his wife:
"An enormous neutral ground now divided them, across which their
emotions signalled like meaningless semaphores." And this neutral
ground, which the sun opens up by bleaching away meaning, feelings, etc,
is something that T-Man can utilise ... it opens up new vistas for him to
explore. |
precisely... it's their "emotions" that signal fruitlessly... but not
the meaning...
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MH wrote:
The drained river bed that he examines with the young woman is one such
area. It is largely devoid of movement and life, but can reveal all sorts
of interesting patterns and shapes on its floor, for example "beds of
mud like nightmare chessboards". He wanders around the river bed,
trying to make sense of its geometry. Another fruitful area is the young
woman's body: "in many ways her body retraced the contours they had
explored together." |
here I think Tman is just getting into his "game"... he's found the
woman (even tho at first he found her boring) and he's "adding
meaning" where there is none by comparing the river's mud flats to bardot's
body... already he "knew intimately the repertoire" of the young
girl's body... and he knows the inclined floors of the car park will act as an
"operating formula" for their time together...
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MH wrote:
But isn't it a bit odd for JGB to say 'cut off from psychopathology',
given all he has said elsewhere about using the psychopathological? Well,
I think what he means is that these perversions are not driven by anything
deep within us, but are just there on the surface, driven by the strength
of the imagination rather than the strength of the emotions ... or to use
one of the catchphrases of At. Ex., they are more 'conceptual'. Which is
exactly what you would expect in the spiritually exhausted inhabitants of
the resort. |
is the resort "neutral"? in one sense, it's so hot and bright it tends
to dull everything within it... but the bit about sex and concepts might be
expanded out: I'm now thinking that when JG says "concept" he's
thinking about it in an advertising kind of way: like a sales campaign needs a
"concept" to hang its message on... he's making sex a literary thing, pointing out that people need to "invent a series of
imaginary sexual perversions"... probably in the same way that richard
pearson invented his KC ad campaign... but just what are these perversions that
Tman feels compelled to create? this is almost a comment on art: will the
concept be a metaphor or simile on sex? in either case, it's a transference of
libido from the body to the mind... or, more to the point, it's an attempt to
have the mind placed above the body... there is no "instinctual" or
body-pleasure sex at work here... just the imagination attempting to create
emotion
the bit about perversions being morally neutral and "cut off from any
suggestion of psychopathology"? is that just JG doing his
"inversion" thing again? or just being perverse himself? or is he just
saying what he says... that that sexual perversions are not intrinsically right
or wrong, but are designated so by an external culture, rather than an innate
mental state? or that perversions are beyond psychopathology, which is simply
"The study of significant causes and processes in the development of mental
illness"... basically, perversions must be sane because JG sez they don't
contribute to mental illnesses... in fact, I bet they tend to prevent mental
illness...
regardless, the point of the exercise is to "keep our feelings alive"
-- in other words, maintain an emotional connection...
but the conceptual sex doesn't seem to be between Tman and the young girl... the
concept is needed to bring together Tman and his wife... they need a sex concept
to form a "point of junction"
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MH wrote:
As meaning drains out of the resort and the out of lives of the people
within it, the normal sense of time disappears; i.e. time as a past and a
future that link with the present. So the past, instead of being a
history, becomes something that exists in our imaginations, and T-man can
play around with his memories |
again, I think the "meaning" of the resort is irrelevant, except as it
represents the landscape of Tman's inner space... as such, it's virtually dead
and emotionless, devoid of water and overlit... I think this remembrance of
Tman's is part of the "concept" he and his wife are acting out... and
basically they're all visual -- no sound, no smell -- a collage of female bits
juxtaposed against the background of social technology.... the "exquisite
games" reminds me of the old surreal parlour game, "exquisite
corpse", so named from the first line of poetry generated by it...
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MH wrote:
And just as 'the past' disappears, so does 'the future' ... or at least
that idea of the future as something that helps tie together our
activities and lives. Instead, we have an open plain of endless
possibilities ... more exquisite games for T-man: "Was he playing an
elaborate game with [the young woman], using their acts of intercourse for
some perverse pleasure of his own?" |
I don't agree: I don't think the past disappears at all... the whole episode is
actually quite short... they arrive, Tman finds the girl, they have an affair,
he blows here away, they leave... it could all have happened on a weekend
Tman must be playing a game with the woman... he's playing with the concept of
turning her into bardot, but that connection never seems to gel completely, or
as it does in the other stories... I think the "perverse pleasure"
Tman is seeking is an emotional response -- any emotion -- to take an axe to the
frozen sea within him... ironically, it appears that it's the young woman who is
tiring of Tman... "she watched him with a tired smile, the same rictus that
had fixed itself on her mouth during their afternoon in the dusty heat trap
below the bank"... the word rictus is loaded with death imagery, and it would appear
our Tman is not much of a lover...
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MH wrote:
In a way, the absence of time passing, the lack of change, is reflected in
the first and last paragraphs, both of which feature T-Man's wife waiting
for him in the car as he wanders around on the beach. These two
paragraphs, which bookend the story, are very similar: but are they two
alternative versions of the same event, or two different moments between
which nothing much has changed ... or is there in no difference between
these two alternatives? |
I agree: the beginning and end is sorta like High-Rise... same, but slightly
advanced...
but mike, you've avoided the denouement... after tman and the girl split, with
the girl finding the young man, tman and da wife go for an "erotic
game" by driving thru the ashy dunes, over mud flats... until Tman gets
stuck at the end of a road... hmmmm... it's at this point that mrs tman takes
over... Tman becomes all sexually excited by the way she walks around the car to
drive (sado-maso?)... revealing his perverted ability to blend body and metal in
the heat cauldron of deserted dunes...
later, she makes an attempt at intimacy by suggesting they go down to the beach
for a drink, but tman is still operating at the conceptual level: he's attracted
to the images of the cinema and car park
voyeuristically he now spies on the girl as she has a tryst with the young
man... he follows them to the car park and then they drive out of town, where
they meet a billboard: "cinemascope of breast and thigh, deceit and
need"... it's a blend of the bardot movie and Tman's concept for an
imaginary perversion... sort of a take-off on the old cheat and make-up
scenario...the bridge is in the distance, the river below... all we're missing
is a little ultra-violence, and that soon comes as Tman apparently causes a car
accident which kills the young man and injures the girl... in her disturbed state he follows her, re-conceptualizing
her in terms of the bridge, movies, billboards and car park...
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MH wrote:
The references throughout the story to his wife's book and the young
woman's magazine are an interesting touch, although I think another
interpretation of them is possible. I'd see the novel as symbolizing a
story with a narrative (a thread of meaning throughout), whereas the
magazine is something we consume a bit here, another bit there, whenever
we feel like it, without any overall meaning to hold it together. |
yes, certainly: and probably more... as the magazine could also represent the
kind of impersonal violence of a society veering towards the death of affect...
in this case, the death of affect seems to be cancelled by "concepts"
-- imaginary perversions that give emotional meaning to a loveless physical
act...
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MH wrote:
All the same, I think there's an ambivalence here (as usual with JGB). The
title is, after all, "The Summer Cannibals" ... and in the
neutral zone that opens up for the characters, some of them may get
devoured by others. |
precisely... you can't imagine all this taking place at high season: no heat, no
brightness, no dead river, no ash heaps... way too many people around... but if
it's people eating people... I'd say it's tman and his wife who
"consume" the "series of imaginary sexual perversions just to
keep our feelings alive"... in their ad campaign for emotion, the concepts
are deceit and desire... they both have to cheat on each other in order to
maintain their perverse relationship... his sexual dalliance is unfulfilling
until he sets up and kills his competitor; her sexuality is not unleashed until
she allows herself to be "emotional" -- responding to a flirtatious
situation without "embarrassment" and being affected by the conceptual
violence of the reported car accident... I think the footprint in the sand is a
metaphor for the entire story... it represents "the little affair"
that comes and goes like "a series of whispers"... she re-establishes
a sexual junction with tman just as the events conclude, just as her potential
lover's footprints "vanish in the sand"...
anyway, what's next?
[MH: 12 February 2007]
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RMcG wrote: mike,
perhaps it's a "world without affect" that we're reacting to...
I don't think JG has sucked the "meaning" out of the
landscape... but he sure has sucked the "emotion" out of it... |
Well T-Man certainly *finds* meaning in the landscape, and in the architecture,
etc - but he presumably only needs to do so because the rest of his life is
without it ... for the very reasons that are paraphrased by the term 'death of
affect'. So I don't think there's much difference between us there ... as you
put it, T-Man is 'adding meaning where there is none by comparing the river's
mud flats to bardot's body'.
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RMcG wrote:
regardless, the point of the exercise is to "keep our feelings
alive" -- in other words, maintain an emotional connection...
but the conceptual sex doesn't seem to be between Tman and the young
girl... the concept is needed to bring together Tman and his wife... they
need a sex concept to form a "point of junction" |
Mmm ... I know JGB sort of suggests that in places, but in this story emotion is
absent throughout. If T-Man has the specific aim of re-establishing some sort of
emotional relationship with his wife (which is not really how I read it), then
does he actually achieve it? If there is some sort of consummation of *their*
relationship it's in the three paragraphs An Erotic Game, Elements of an Orgasm,
and Post-coitum Triste. But the 'orgasm' described there is as unemotional and
conceptual as anything in the chapter; and it is all one-sided ... when T-man
tells his wife to drive, she 'looks up wearily' ... and post-coitum we're told
"He ignored her voice, with its unconvinced attempt at intimacy".
He goes straight from there to his alternative erotic encounter (causing the
automobile accident) in a paragraph tellingly entitled 'Foreplay'.
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RMcG wrote:
I don't agree: I don't think the past disappears at all... the whole
episode is actually quite short... they arrive, Tman finds the girl, they
have an affair, he blows here away, they leave... it could all have
happened on a weekend |
The past doesn't disappear ... it isn't in the story at all, except in the
memories that T-Man plays with. And there's no future referred to - the end
paragraph is virtually identical to the first. So the short period of time in
which the events of 'Summer Cannibals' takes place is entirely self-contained
... it only means as much or as little as T-Man makes it mean.
The 'no past, no future' reading is really just similar to the oft-expressed
idea that the modern world has tended to destroy the meaningful links that used
to characterise and structure peoples' lives, so that we live in an 'everlasting
present'. What I'm trying to say is that T-Man is an extreme result of that
process ... but that's taken for granted in the story; it's why we aren't told
anything about him, and it's why the story is self-contained. Or at least,
that's the way I read it ...
Parenthetically, I might add that I'm trying to relate this idea of 'no past, no
future' that I see in 'Summer Cannibals' to what goes on in those stories from
the early 1980s, which are all about the 'living outside of time'. But that's
for another occasion.
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RMcG wrote:
they both have to cheat on each other in order to maintain their perverse
relationship... his sexual dalliance is unfulfilling until he sets up and
kills his competitor; her sexuality is not unleashed until she allows
herself to be "emotional" -- responding to a flirtatious
situation without "embarrassment" and being affected by the
conceptual violence of the reported car accident... I think the footprint
in the sand is a metaphor for the entire story... it represents "the
little affair" that comes and goes like "a series of
whispers"... she re-establishes a sexual junction with tman just as
the events conclude, just as her potential lover's footprints "vanish
in the sand"... |
I think that's where you and I have different readings of 'Cannibals'. I just
can't convince myself that there's any meaningful connection (in the usual sense
of that phrase) re-established between T-Man and his wife. If T-Man is really
trying to do that, then he has to *care* about the relationship with his wife in
some way, and there's no evidence in the story for that, so far as I can see.
When he wonders 'what act between them would establish a point of juncture', he
seems as cool and analytical as the rest of the time.
So maybe the best thing is pass on to ...
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RMcG wrote:
anyway, what's next? |
Tolerances of the Human Face.
And then that's it so far as I'm concerned ... I don't really feel I could do
justice to the sections collected at the end of the book - the Reagan piece,
Love & Export, etc. Unless of course you fancy doing a lengthy disquisition
on 'Generations of America'. ;)
[RMcG: 13 February 2007]
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MH wrote: If
T-Man has the specific aim of re-establishing some sort of emotional
relationship with his wife (which is not really how I read it), then does
he actually achieve it? If there is some sort of consummation of *their*
relationship it's in the three paragraphs An Erotic Game, Elements of an
Orgasm, and Post-coitum Triste. But the 'orgasm' described there is as
unemotional and conceptual as anything in the chapter; and it is all
one-sided ... when T-man tells his wife to drive, she 'looks up wearily'
... and post-coitum we're told "He ignored her voice, with its
unconvinced attempt at intimacy". He goes straight from there to his
alternative erotic encounter (causing the automobile accident) in a
paragraph tellingly entitled 'Foreplay'. |
well, in his notes jg sez that locus solus is a place where, "sex becomes
stylized, relationships more oblique... the white light has bleached out the
identities of the characters..." and later "traven is veering between
his wife and the young woman"...
as for emotion -- well, they're not completely inhuman yet... there's some
emotion (save love and hate)... but I think I agree with you -- there's no
conscious plan of reconciliation between tman and his wife... their relationship
is as dry as the landscape, predictable as the architecture, etc etc.. but say,
didja notice how often tman's wife is wet in the story, eh? part of her
inability to get with the program, as tman never gets near the stuff (except by
the beach)? or does she think naked women in the bathroom will turn tman on?
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MH wrote:
The past doesn't disappear ... it isn't in the story at all, except in the
memories that T-Man plays with. And there's no future referred to - the
end paragraph is virtually identical to the first. So the short period of
time in which the events of 'Summer Cannibals' takes place is entirely
self-contained ... it only means as much or as little as T-Man makes it
mean.
The 'no past, no future' reading is really just similar to the
oft-expressed idea that the modern world has tended to destroy the
meaningful links that used to characterise and structure peoples' lives,
so that we live in an 'everlasting present'. What I'm trying to say is
that T-Man is an extreme result of that process ... but that's taken for
granted in the story; it's why we aren't told anything about him, and it's
why the story is self-contained. Or at least, that's the way I read it ... |
OK... altho I think the temporality of all these stories is more a result of the
"experimental" writing style than the narrative... the fiction of TV
news and advertising copy styles, the rationality of technical writing, the
choppy timelines, the purposeful ambiguity of personal metaphor and symbolism,
the externalization of the nervous system, etc etc... it's like a newsmagazine
with glossy ads... the story is like a 30-second ad for how to use someone for
sex in between a boring movie about a guy wandering a beach... it's part of the
effect that we know nothing about these characters... their past and future is
implied, much like in "The Index", by hint and association... our
protagonist could very well be the tman from the other stories, on a vacation,
and then we could include all that tman "past" in fleshing out this
story...
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MH wrote:
I think that's where you and I have different readings of 'Cannibals'. I
just can't convince myself that there's any meaningful connection (in the
usual sense of that phrase) re-established between T-Man and his wife. If
T-Man is really trying to do that, then he has to *care* about the
relationship with his wife in some way, and there's no evidence in the
story for that, so far as I can see. When he wonders 'what act between
them would establish a point of juncture', he seems as cool and analytical
as the rest of the time. |
OK, as I said above, I may have been pushing it with a reconciliation motive...
if this tman is like the others, except a bit saner, then he's also
narcissistically pursuing his own attempts at regaining "normalcy",
and this time his object seems to be conceptually consuming some person in order
to find what must be a sexual release... "veering" between the two
women must set up some tension, and consummating his affair with the young woman
seems to place him in "the zone", even if it is the "zone of
nothing" -- a quiet mind?
and I think the para titled "elements of an orgasm" is in actually the
description of a sex scene between tman and his wife... translated, of course...
afterwards, in "post-coitum triste", the mechanical nature of their
relationship is revealed, and tman rejects her unconvinced attempt at intimacy
and turns to the forbidden pleasures of the cinema screen and car park... so sex
with the old lady is like asking her to drive, and tman decides to taste more
dangerous fruit... satisfied, he acquiesces back to his solitary beach-walking
ways...
bottom line? certainly the problem and the solution in sumcan is not as complex
or imaginative as tman escapades in other stories... away from the institute and
his usual audience, tman chooses to cheat on his wife and rationalizes the event
as a form of conceptual sex based on the need for present-day perversions in
order to make contact with "others" and "keep our feelings
alive"... he's as bad as dr nathan... (whom I've got no faith in)
[MH: 13 February 2007]
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RMcG wrote: didja
notice how often tman's wife is wet in the story, eh? part of her
inability to get with the program, as tman never gets near the stuff
(except by the beach)? |
His 'damp crotch' ... don't forget about that!
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RMcG wrote: OK...
altho I think the temporality of all these stories is more a result of the
"experimental" writing style than the narrative... the fiction
of TV news and advertising copy styles, the rationality of technical
writing, the choppy timelines, the purposeful ambiguity of personal
metaphor and symbolism, the externalization of the nervous system, etc
etc... |
Yes, the experimental style used by JGB and others around that time was partly a
deliberate attempt to try and reflect the rhythm of the way we now live ...
chopped up, lack of connections, concentration on the present, and so on. That's
partly the reason for leaving the reader free to make their own interpretation
of what's going on ... if you put in all that's needed to tell the reader what's
happening, then you've already made the text unrealistic in terms of the way
people live, it's all too over-determined. Both JGB and Moorcock will bang on
about that even today ... and it's a topic that JGB touched on at both of the
events I attended for his last two books - the pitfalls of 'realistic'
literature.
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RMcG wrote:
consummating his affair with the young woman seems to place him in
"the zone", even if it is the "zone of nothing" -- a
quiet mind? |
I'd not really picked up on the title of the final paragraph ... it's quite apt
on either of our interpretations, isn't it? A quiet mind ... or everything
vanishes like the footprints.
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RMcG wrote:
tman chooses to cheat on his wife and rationalizes the event as a form of
conceptual sex based on the need for present-day perversions in order to
make contact with "others" and "keep our feelings
alive"... he's as bad as dr nathan... (whom I've got no faith in) |
Do you mean you've got no faith in the good doctor's diagnoses? I think the
problem with Nathan is more that, while he *understands* (as JGB suggests in the
annotations), he doesn't act. Or maybe that's not quite right ... it's that he
isn't *engaged*, so he stands no chance of getting anywhere else.
[RMcG: 13 February 2007]
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MH wrote:
Do you mean you've got no faith in the good doctor's diagnoses? I think
the problem with Nathan is more that, while he *understands* (as JGB
suggests in the annotations), he doesn't act. Or maybe that's not quite
right ... it's that he isn't *engaged*, so he stands no chance of getting
anywhere else. |
I think he'll be a problem... are all the characters "symbols"? my
problem with nathan is I think he's a fake... his "scientific" raps
all too often fumble away into imaginary concepts, giving us an
"understanding", but not a "realistic" one...
[MH: 13 February 2007]
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RMcG wrote:
my problem with nathan is I think he's a fake... his
"scientific" raps all too often fumble away into imaginary
concepts, giving us an "understanding", but not a
"realistic" one... |
It's T-Man who's the scientist in At Ex, isn't it? After all, he's the one who
frames hypotheses, designs and carries out experiments ... all Nathan does is
talk.
[RMcG: 13 February 2007]
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MH wrote: It's
T-Man who's the scientist in At Ex, isn't it? After all, he's the one who
frames hypotheses, designs and carries out experiments ... all Nathan does
is talk. |
precisely... and tho nathan sounds "scientific", he's not:
"nader's true role is clearly very different from his apparent one, to be
deciphered in terms of the postures we assume, our anxieties mimetized in the
junction between wall and ceiling"...
there are many like examples of nathan offering these enigmatic
"answers", these alternate, subjective ways of communicating
information... in fact, isn't a large part of AX concerned with
"communication"? mediums and messages? and how/why nobody really knows
real from false? and how/why that tension creates the death of affect?
anyway, nathan's poetic flights might be revealing (a) the closeness of science
and art as a creative project, (b) science is basically bullshit when it goes
completely cerebral (total intelligence is madness), (c) you can make anything
sound scientific if you use the correct language, regardless of its
comprehensibility (form over content... the basis of a textual analysis?)
but there's no doubt about it: nathan is one of the key images... the scientific
"observer" who, quantum-like, influences the experiments he
observes... just like we do when we attach meanings meaningful to us to this collage of consumer/consumed icons from a psychologically-charged moment in
western history...
could we say it's an Exhibition of the 60s zeitgeist, with the usual ballardian
"inversions" to keep us in the terminal zone?
no wonder JGB wanted it to be called "TAE" and have that story start
us off... it picturesquely defines the rest of the book... and no wonder he was
pissed at grove press for renaming it the improbable "Love & Napalm:
Export USA".... that title eliminates the book's "entry clue",
takes away yr ticket to get into the show...
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